Nice job AD.
A couple of notes. you might run 24 or 36" chicken wire around the bottom. If you have skunks, they can decimate a hive.
And why is one hive shorter than the other? Both have 2 deeps, good. One has a migratory top & the other a telescoping. You might want to put a brick on top of each hive (wind will knock them over).
And are they facing opposite directions? That will make working the hives more difficult, you want to work from behind the hive and one will always be aiming at you. This is a region thing, I know up north people cluster hives in winter to conserve some heat, so maybe that arrangement works up there. I like a few feet between my hives, then I don't accidently bump one hive when working another. But then my girls have serious anger issues... seriously serious.
I'm not criticizing, I'm just offering a few little details.
Robin, a few dead bees outside the entrance is no big deal. The workers drag out the dead. Usually they drop them off the ledge, but sometimes they're lazy & let the wind finish the job. If you see dozens and dozens, that's a problem.